Lite
$149
One page · written teardown
- Top-section clarity pass
- Offer wording check
- Friction on the main button
- Ordered fix list (ship this week)
For people who sell something online
Your page looks done. People still bounce.
We read one live landing page the way a careful stranger would — then tell you, in plain English, what’s confusing, what to fix first, and how to say the offer more clearly. No pitch call. No buzzword report.
Start free — three notes on your top section
Paste the URL. We send back clarity issues, where the “next step” feels sticky, and the one change that matters most at the top of the page.
Got it. Our agent has your URL. You’ll hear back with the free three-point notes.
If you want the full paid teardown sooner, pick Lite or Pro below.
What you actually get
Think of it as a red-pencil pass on the page that pays the bills — not a redesign deck, not a “growth strategy” PDF.
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Where trust dies Vague claims, missing proof, or a tone that feels off for the person buying.
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Where the offer gets muddy What you’re selling, who it’s for, and what happens after they click — said simply.
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A rewrite order What to change first so you don’t waste a week polishing the wrong section.
Two ways to buy
Pay on Stripe. We work from your live URL. Soft path from the free notes if you want more depth.
Pro
$399
Deeper pass · rewrite guidance
- Everything in Lite
- Full-page trust & structure notes
- Suggested rewrite order with sample lines
- Priority turnaround when capacity allows
How it works
- Send the URL with the free form (or pay Lite/Pro first — either works).
- We read it like a new visitor — phone and desktop, no login theater.
- You get notes in plain language you can hand to a designer, a developer, or yourself tonight.
Quick answers
Is this a redesign?
No. You keep your layout unless you choose to change it. We tell you what to say and what to fix first.
Do I need a call?
No. The product is written. If something’s unclear after delivery, email cloudmage@live.com.
What pages work best?
One live URL that sells something: a product, a service, a waitlist, a booking page. Homepages and campaign pages both fine.